Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Business Letter


Ripon High School
1297 N Wilson Drive
Spokane, WA 99208

September 14, 2012

Mrs. Black
398 E Green Ave.
Spokane, WA 99208

Dear Mrs. Black:

I am writing this letter in regards to Jack’s behavior problems in school, and the decision we, as administrators, have come to. Jack is being expelled from Ripon High School on behalf of the administration and the school community. This decision was not easy, but we believe that Jack would be much more successful in a different school in the Spokane area. There are various other options for Jack at this time, and we hope you have the chance to explore a few of them.

In the first semester that he has attended Ripon High School, there has been numerous instances where Jack has been a threat to other teachers and students. You and I have met before to discuss Jack’s behavioral problems, and there seems to be little to no change in his actions. For example, Jack has brought a pocketknife to school on the 16th of July, locked a teacher out of her room on the 14th of August, and also hit another student in the head with a baseball bat on the 2nd of September. Here at Ripon High School, we value our student’s safety over everything and we believe that Jack, at times, can perform dangerous acts that challenge the safety of the school as a whole.

There are many other options out there for Jack. In Spokane alone, there are dozens of high schools where Jack would benefit by attending. We, as administrators, believe a fresh start could be very beneficial for Jack. Jack will be able to meet new people and will have a chance to move past these negative actions, and look forward to a better future as a student and person.

If you have any questions or would like any assistance regarding Jack, please feel free to contact me at (509) 555-4927 or email me at chadallen.riponhs@gmail.com

Sincerely,



Chad Allen
Principal, Ripon High School

Friday, September 14, 2012

Dan Sperber Article Review (Revised)


Chad Allen
English 101
14 September 2012
One Step Forward, Two Steps Back?
            In Dan Sperber’s article, “The Future of Writing,” Sperber addresses the issue that people have slowly moved away from writing, and are moving toward a new way of life using speech-to-writing technologies. With his knowledge on the topic, Dan Sperber argues that the advancements in technology will sooner or later diminish the importance of writing in our society. Sperber believes speech-to-text technology is not as amazing as it first seems, and that it could overall bring more harm to the world rather than good. Sperber uses many different points of view in his writing to back up his claims
            Sperber starts out his article by questioning the claim that, “both writing and reading will soon be things of the past . . . a mere parenthesis in human history” (Sperber 3).  The whole idea that writing and reading could be ending is such a bizarre thing to even bring up. While I was reading, I had to stop and think about a world where reading and writing would be unnecessary to normal life, and the idea really boggled my mind. Everything we do as human beings really revolves around reading and writing. For instance, I am writing this paper now, and reading Sperber’s article, at the same time. Sperber brings up a good point by stating that, “with a less frequent use of writing and reading, there would be fewer written texts to read, and fewer people disposed to read them. As a consequence, the benefits of writing and reading would be smaller, and might not compare favorably with the costs” (Sperber 5). I believe that Sperber makes a good claim here because there really is no benefit to removing writing and reading from society, there are just many consequences.
            Another idea Sperber brings to the table is that in our world today, most of us would much rather just write instead of dealing with speech technology, which is not 100% reliable. Sperber reminds the people of today that, “if given the choice, most of us would rather write than dictate. The main reason, I presume, is that when you dictate you have much less control over your text than when you write” (Sperber 5). By making this comment, Sperber believes that while speech/writing technology seems like a cool idea at first, there are many observations that have to be made about the accessibility. When you talk, you have much less control over what you say, rather than when you physically write out what you are saying.
            A strong point that really stood out to me is when Sperber states, “Writing allows one to express one’s thought in a richer, subtler and more controlled way than speech” (Sperber 8). Sperber’s claim here is that by writing, a person can really shape what they want to say, and make it more unique than that of just verbally talking. I 100% agree with this idea because from personal experiences, I love having the option of rereading my text and spicing it up, making it overall better.
            Sperber also looks at the counterargument which states that speech is better than writing by addressing the problem that, “however used we may be to moving a pen over paper or to pressing keys, speech is much more natural” (Sperber 9). By making this comment, Sperber is digging deeper into the aesthetics of the situation by providing the readers with something familiar, the fact that speech is more natural, but on the other hand, he discusses how life would be worse of if we were limited to only using speech-writing technologies. I agree with Sperber’s claim; even though speech is more natural, writing is much more sophisticated and intelligent. Most people can speak well, but not everyone can write well. Even though Sperber addresses some positives for his opposing argument, he advocates for reading and writing much more.
            In conclusion, I believe that Dan Sperber gives very accurate opinions on the benefits of writing, and how writing will always be an important part of society in the future. Sperber’s article was very convincing because he was very knowledgeable on the topic, and was very relatable to the readers. I was hooked on his writing style and fully understood his argument. Sperber demonstrates a very realistic writing style and shows his readers many alternate views that can be thought of as unsatisfactory opinions. I would definitely recommend this article to any technological person out there who believes that writing is unnecessary to life, and that speech technology will be the new standard. I would also recommend this article to anyone who is curious about the importance of writing and reading in society. Overall, Sperber makes excellent claims on the importance of writing, and how advancements in speech technology might not be as amazing as they first seem.

           Works Cited
Sperber, Dan. “The Future of Writing.” Dansperber.fr. International Cognition and Culture Institute, 11 September 2012.

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Dan Sperber Article Review First Draft


Chad Allen
English 101
14 September 2012
Moving Forward
            In Dan Sperber’s article, “The Future of Writing,” Sperber addresses the issue that people have slowly moved away from writing, and are moving toward a new way of speech-to-writing lifestyle[M1] [M2] .. With his knowledge on the topic, Dan Sperber argues that the advancements in technology will sooner or later diminish the importance of writing in our society. Sperber believes speech-to-text technology is not as amazing as it first seems, and that it could overall bring more harm to the world rather than good. He advocates many values in writing that reading fails to accomplish.[M3]  Sperber uses many different points of view in his writing to back up his claims
            Sperber starts out his article by questioning the claim that, “both writing and reading will soon be things of the past . . . a mere parenthesis in human history” (Sperber 3).  The whole idea that writing and reading could be ending is such a bizarre thing to even bring up. While I was reading, I had to stop and think about a world where reading and writing would be unnecessary to normal life, and the idea really boggled my mind. Everything we do as human beings really revolves around reading and writing. For instance, I am writing this paper now, and reading Sperber’s article, at the same time. Sperber brings up a good point by stating that, “with a less frequent use of writing and reading, there would be fewer written texts to read, and fewer people disposed to read them. As a consequence, the benefits of writing and reading would be smaller, and might not compare favorably with the costs” (Sperber 5). I believe that Sperber makes a good claim here because there really is no benefit to removing writing and reading from society, there are just many consequences. [M4] 
            Another idea Sperber brings to the table is that in our world today, most of us would much rather just write instead of dealing with speech technology, which is not 100% reliable. Sperber reminds the people of today that, “if given the choice, most of us would rather write than dictate. The main reason, I presume, is that when you dictate you have much less control over your text than when you write” (Sperber 5). By making this comment, Sperber believes that while speech/writing technology seems like a cool idea at first, there are many observations that have to be made about the accessibility. When you talk, you have much less control over what you say, rather then [M5] when you physically write out what you are saying.
            A strong point that really stood out to me is when Sperber states, “Writing allows one to express one’s thought in a richer, subtler and more controlled way than speech” (Sperber 8). Sperber’s claim here is that by writing, a person can really shape what they want to say, and make it more unique than that of just verbally talking. I 100% agree with this idea because from personal experiences, I love having the option of rereading my text and spicing it up, making it overall better.
            Sperber somewhat agrees with the argument [M6] that speech is better then [M7] writing by stating, “however used we may be to moving a pen over paper or to pressing keys, speech is much more natural” (Sperber 9). By making this comment, Sperber is digging deeper into the aesthetics of the situation by providing the readers with something familiar, the fact that speech is more natural. Everyone talks, and it is much easier to write. I agree with his claim, but even though speech is more natural, writing is much more sophisticated and intelligent. Everyone can speak well[M8] , but not everyone can write well.
            In conclusion, I believe that Dan Sperber gives very accurate opinions on the benefits of writing, and how writing will always be an important part of society in the future. Sperber’s article was very convincing because he was very knowledgeable on the topic, and was very relatable to the readers. I was hooked on his writing style and fully understood his argument. Sperber demonstrates a very realistic writing style and shows his readers many alternate views that can be thought of as unsatisfactory opinions. I would definitely recommend this article to any technological person out there who believes that writing is unnecessary to life, and that speech technology will be the new standard. I would also recommend this article to anyone who is curious about the importance of writing and reading in society. Overall, Sperber makes excellent claims on the importance of writing, and how advancements in speech technology might not be as amazing as they first seem[M9] .


[M10 Works Cited

1[M11] . Sperber, Dan. “The Future of Writing.” Dansperber.fr. International Cognition and   Culture Institute, 11 September 2012[M12] .





 [M1]grammar


 [M2]a bit awkward phrasing, can you reword this?


 [M3]Does he really compare reading vs. writing?  You may want to revisit the text.


 [M4]So far good balance of opinion and summary from the article.


 [M5]Take Word’a advice on this.


 [M6]Hmmm, you have conflicting points in your review.  You state Sperber is both for writing and for speech-to-text…does he advocate for one more strongly than another?  You should try and explain this more in your article as it is confusing to the reader (especially if they have not read the article, which Sperber is actually for.


 [M7]


 [M8]Is this really true?


 [M9]Really solid conclusion


 [M10]What’s all this extra space for?


 [M11]Don’t number your sources


 [M12]Overall you definitely understood the article and your comments were insightful.

You may have slightly misunderstood part of the article.  It seems at one point you are saying Sperber thinks writing will stay, but then say Sperber actually thinks it will be replaced.  Explain this further

Also, I’d like to see a bit more commentary on what Sperber thinks about reading.  Will it stay or be replaced?

Really good start, but needs a little work.

Grade:  4/4